There's a lot to like about it, but my one suggestion would be to perhaps crop out the roof of the train. Either just the white, or down to the darker grey. When I scroll my window down to crop it myself, I feel the composition is more in balance.
Thanks so much for the feedback! I did not crop the top of the train because i wanted to justify the light source and make the image look complete. But I shall try a crop and see if that works too
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Let me show you something: [link] Go ahead, click it, don't be scared!
There's a lot to like about it, but my one suggestion would be to perhaps crop out the roof of the train. Either just the white, or down to the darker grey. When I scroll my window down to crop it myself, I feel the composition is more in balance.
I did not crop the top of the train because i wanted to justify the light source and make the image look complete.
But I shall try a crop and see if that works too
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Let me show you something: [link]
Go ahead, click it, don't be scared!